Not sure about the picture - since we're thinking about making present into the past, maybe b&W or at least a bit darker would suit more. " I MUST" might be in smaller type and second and the last lines might be bigger. Dashed lines makes me think about excess of variety of types. It's not a proffesional opinion though...
Also, had you really meant to write "BECAUSE ARE THERE A THOUSAND" ?
its kind personal, the I MUST is bigger because its the part i focus, its like making the words stronger. The picture is in this tone because its about changing your life, so if you close the door you gonna see the outside part that you never saw because you were inside the door. And im pretty sure the quote should be because there are a thousand right? The dashed lines in my opinion represent the steps to move on, its confusing i know..
Anyway thank you for your comment, it makes me think about my pieces and the idea. Thanks.